This is terrific! I love the constant changes, both in POV, and in tone—the simple narrative at the beginning, with all those lovely hints of their feelings, and then the sudden bursts of suspense and humour :) Laughing Illya is a charm, and I love their different views on the pleasures of the spa XD
From: highfield Date: 01/05/2011
Great story! Very enjoyable! I can just imagine the bitching Mr. Waverly is going to do when they confess about the switches.
