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Comments on The Canceled Vacation Affair

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From:
Francesca
Date:
01/31/2012
I love how the sex grew calmer and sweeter, the kisses more poetic, and how the end showed that the feelings growing throughout the piece had seeds in the beginning.

In other words, beautiful.

From:
alynwa
Date:
03/06/2011
Fortunately, the story for me is black words on white background. I loved Napoleon's frustration at having his partner with him openly for a mission but not in reality. The sex scenes were very loving, romantic even.

Thanks for sharing.

From:
GeorgiaMagnolia
Date:
05/16/2010
I do not see an all italics version so I have no idea what is making it look that way for you, though in the version I see it is blue print on a black screen and I very much wish it was not, but have no idea how to fix, since that is NOT what I want it to look like. Sorry if your version is broken, I can't fix what I can't find though.

From:
abaddon
Date:
05/05/2010
Did you mean to format the html such that the entire text is in italics? I hit the back button because I found it too distracting.

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