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From:
periwinkle
Date:
11/13/2006
This was cute and I enjoyed it.

You could use a beta though -- there are a few grammar mistakes and typos. And in the beginning you have "signed" or "sighed." But it was a lot of fun

From:
Hazelayes
Date:
11/13/2006
Sigh. Does no-one take H/C seriously nowadays?

Still enjoyed the story though ;) Thanks for sharing the marshmallows!


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