Lovely story, which perfectly captures the dynamic between them. And your last line zinged right through me.
From: Y Date: 08/26/2005
Very nice writing in such few words. I like how you show their synchronicity together, which shows their connection, then have such a moment that a look is like a kiss. I want more!
[Also, do not feel you have to respond to my feedback--I would just love to see more writing!]
