I really enjoyed this. I liked what was said between Illya and Jake. You have a very nice writing style. Keep at it!
From: Romanse Date: 08/14/2006
This is a beautiful, rare story. I was hard pressed not to get teary-eyed at certain places. I think it's very courageous writing to dare to weave Christian teachings into fanfic. Three cheers for complete creative freedom of expression!