Truly beautiful. I loved everything about this story. You've described their drunken encounter with mind-blowing authenticity, and then gift-wrapped it in poetry. Gorgeous. Thank you for a stunning read.
From: alynwa Date: 01/16/2011
This was HOT! I was hanging on every word. You are awesome.
From: ChannelD Date: 05/11/2008
Holy cow, Cord. That was so hot. It got so hot so fast and stayed that way through the whole thing. You are the only writer of all the writers I have read in fandom who can get so detailed and physical without making me so uncomfortable I have to stop reading. Usually I skim the graphic scenes but with yours I hang on every word, every syllable, every steamy yet tender detail. You are my absolutely favorite MFU/ writer.
From: Meris Date: 10/13/2004
Heilige Kuh! Holeeeee cow! Hot! Hot! Hot! Hot! If this is what it's like to be drunk, don't ever stop!
I love the physicality of this. Napoleon's confusion of persons going with the confusion of his senses. And the alternation of belief and disbelief - he disbelieves with his mind and believes with his body. Oh yes. This was - ahem - tasty
