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Comments on The Secret Word Is Home

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From:
alynwa
Date:
12/14/2010
Wonderful! I hope you come back to this to tell more of this story.

From:
Kt
Date:
08/11/2010
This is so good it needs a sequel.

From:
Nataliya
Date:
06/30/2007
SWEET is the word, all right. Off to my hard drive it goes.

From:
periwinkle
Date:
05/23/2006
I just reread this today, and I wanted to tell you how sweet I find it, and how true-to-life Illya's fears and thoughts seem. It's very poetic.

From:
Francis Kerst
Date:
05/22/2004
Sounds very right (though I'm not sure that ambivalent sex ability is commonly expected from enforcement agents in the spying world; usually the sex entrapping is left to specialists; but that's a detail)I seldom feel credible in slash stories (even the ones I like the most) the first move driving two, a priori, straight guys to start a sexual relationship, and much less when they are partners and top professionnals...But the way you describe a depression syndrom, I can believe it (perhaps because I experienced it; I know sometimes you are ready to do anything just to feel a little alive again) and there is no need to explain Napoleon's reasons, since the text reflects Illya's ravings. I think the idea could be used in a larger story, with all the step by step progression of the change in both the partner's minds...

Francis

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