Your portrayal of Waverly is utterly delightful. Everything he said toward the end had me chuckling at least, but when you got to the Sacred Band, I laughed aloud and basically squirmed with giggles until the inevitable reveal to Illya, which provoked another guffaw.
In other words, excellently done!
From: none Date: 03/27/2010
Please, don`t write on Russian, it`s ridiculous!
From: Sithdragn Date: 04/27/2009
Still in my top 3 fave MFU stories of all time. Definitely my most re-read.
From: off Date: 03/20/2006
Oh, my. So lovely. I just flowed with the story, the unfolding of desire and the shaking, foundering steps of a new turn in such a sweet relationship.
The sex was good. The rest was better.
I must read more.
From: Bluster Date: 05/23/2004
You know I love this story, but I just wanted to say so in public. The overwheming positive response you received when you first posted this story was all well deserved.